Sick Sentences - Sir Edmund Hillary

 Sentences- The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.

Sir Edmund Hillary victoriously hiked up the steep slippery slope, but the ice was as still as a crystal shining in the sun light.

 His hand's held two long jet black poles that dig into the ice like a nail in a wall. Silently the sun sets into the horizon, and the crescent Moon glows like thousands of glow worms all squishing together into that shape

Later the morning the sky was as light as a blue feather.( The sky was so clear blue)

Edmund finally made it to the top and felt proud of himself, He studies the view of the beautiful world , then stabbed a metal pole with a swaying flag on the very tip on the very top. It danced in the air like a free ballet dancer in a mountain of ice.