Genre Writing: Trapping the Sun

Here is another genre writing that I have been working on. It is a short story but.............it is still good! I hope that you enjoy reading this. If you have any feedback but it in the comments. 

HERE IS MY PIECE!

Solemnly, the girl strolls across the rocky terrain. Her hands are butter as she grips onto the rope that wraps around the immense ball of gas. In return of her shady dark planet. 

Day turns into night and clouds turn into stars, as the girl takes a short break from her exhausting hike. Carefully, she ties the thick rope around a solid rock that is a block of steel. 

Can you find the metaphors? There are 2 of them. Thanks for checking out my blog! BLOG YA LATER!😁