Thursday 23 July 2020

Improving our Blogpost

Last term Room 24 did an activity about improving our blog posts. I chose to improve my t-shirt one that I designed for Carla from 'There's a Boy In The Girls' Bathroom'. 

 Here is my improvement.
You can click on it to see it better.

 I hope you enjoyed this blog post! Do you think that the after version is better than the before? BLOG YA LATER!
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 July 2020 at 15:26

    Hi Leilani its Zion-li from Room 6.

    I like your post about Cyber smart I think that is really cool and The shirts look really cool.
    I think you should post things like this. What else have you done?
    Blog ya later

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  2. Anonymous26 July 2020 at 15:41

    Hi Leilani its Finley from Room 6.

    I like your blog post about Cyber smart.
    It looks really cool and I like how you put more detail in your work.
    I should thing about doing it too? Are you proud of your blog post?.
    come to my blog here is the link
    odsfinley.blogspot it should show the link

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