Wednesday, 19 August 2020

Sick vs Healthy PT 3!

I hope you have enjoyed reading my other healthy sentences of the 2 other pictures. Today I will be doing another blog post about sick and healthy sentences. Today's picture is this.

Here are my sentences!!

Sick Sentences:
The family held onto the plants. They were in the giant's garden.They could see the giant. He looked angry.

Healthy Sentences:
Astonished, the family rub their miniature hands on the giant's enormous blooming flowers. The grass garden were skyscrapers as they stood tall above the family. 
“Look in the house, is that the giant sleeping?” The oldest child questions. 
“Oh hey, it is.” Dad answers. 
“It looks like he’s an angry sleeper. How about we just leave him alone and go back to Mini town?” Mum Suggested.
“Yeah, come to think about it, we might get squished by a giant. So let’s go…QUICKLY!” Dad said in a rush.

Thanks for checking out another one of these sentence blog posts. Can you spot the metaphor in the story?
BLOG YA LATER!😆

2 comments:

  1. Great writing, Leilani. Is the metaphor "grass garden were skyscrapers"?

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    1. Hi Mr P! Thanks fro commenting on my blog post.
      Yes you are correct!

      Thanks again, Leilani.

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