Here are my sentences!!
Sick Sentences:
The family held onto the plants. They were in the giant's garden.They could see the giant. He looked angry.
Healthy Sentences:
Astonished, the family rub their miniature hands on the giant's enormous blooming flowers. The grass garden were skyscrapers as they stood tall above the family.
“Look in the house, is that the giant sleeping?” The oldest child questions.
“Oh hey, it is.” Dad answers.
“It looks like he’s an angry sleeper. How about we just leave him alone and go back to Mini town?” Mum Suggested.
“Yeah, come to think about it, we might get squished by a giant. So let’s go…QUICKLY!” Dad said in a rush.
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Great writing, Leilani. Is the metaphor "grass garden were skyscrapers"?
ReplyDeleteHi Mr P! Thanks fro commenting on my blog post.
DeleteYes you are correct!
Thanks again, Leilani.