Wednesday, 26 August 2020

Sick vs Healthy PT 7

HI!! Here is another sentence blog post! This time the picture is about a gigantic earth giant coming out of the underground. 
Here is the picture and my sentences.


Sick sentences:
The big giant opened his mouth and yelled. His big head was a grey colour. He was really big and angry.

Healthy sentences:
Grumpy, the enormous stone giant awakened from the underground world, yawning as loud as a fierce lion roar. Like an earthquake, he stood up stretching, rumbling the streets of London. “HUMPH” He moans annoyed as he sleepy stomped towards the food bar. 

Thanks for checking out my blog today bloggers! 
BLOG YA LATERšŸ˜ŠLeilani.

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